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Thanks for your response. I tried to use some figurative language in this piece. I have written in a very long time because of my jammed pack college load...So more comments are welcome.

I think we were put here on earth to discover something greater..something that can't be contained to a word..Like love, faith, and happiness. These things can't be described by just a word.. Love has to much power, to many levels..Same goes for the rest. We are placed on earth to touch another person like as guide or friend..Whether we know each other or not our existence in this world is connected to a bigger picture...Lol, I wish this question was posed in my philosophy class.

I hope to be successful in whatever i choose to do in life..When I say successful I don't mean with money but in spirit..I measure successful by how complete and happy I feel with myself..I hope by the age of 25 I'm setttled down with a nice job and familia. I guess I want the ordinary things in life. I just hope when I get like 60 I can look back at my life and say I made a differnce in someone else life. That is the most I can do..

I'm most definitely for gay marriage simply because it's how they feel.. Who can say heterosexaulity is the only right way to live? God gave us free will to do as we wish. We only think hetersexuality is the right way of life because that's the norm for us...Some people have different tastes...Those differences distinguishes how diverse our culture is in the world. I hope when people decide if gay marriage should be allowed they base their decision on not their preferences ot belief in right or wrong..but on another person's happiness. I hope that makes sense.

In order to say abortion is wrong or right i would have to look at the scenario..For instance if a woman was raped and ended becoming pregnant thru the action I would thin abortion would be appropiate..But if the female knows what she is doing when she has sex and she end up pregnant I think she should keep it..I don't know..If i looked at it from the woman's prospective I would say it's her body..who are we to tell them what to do or what to do with it.. We make the babies but they must carry it... So i say allow abortion.

If the government implements the draft now i think it would turn into another Vietnam..People will start burning the flag and their draft cards...It would be serious...I know I would rather go to jail then serve in a war i do not believe in.

this is really good. I like the color scheme you have going. I hope to see more work from you.

this site is very active and i like it a lot. I hope to see more people posting up poems in the Creativity forum. -1-

GTA: SA is pure Genius...I wake up to playing that game n listening to scarface soundtrack b4 i go to class..That game sets the mood for holding a heist somewhere.

I have a question say for instance u use someone else computer to download music but they didn't know...So would they get in trouble since it's from their computer..I figure if that's the case no one will be able to use someone else computer.

wow this is crazy. I couldn't make it if my cell phone was messed up from a virus.. I say more people use cell phones more than computers now days. The world would be off balance.

Lets not get on the topic of eminem...I like a Couple of his raps but honestly they all sound the same to me...I hate my momma, *BLEEP* people, and i hate my g/f. I don't want to sound racist but I must say..since he's a white rapper people have been gassing him up like he's the great tupac, biggie, or nas. And I must say NO! There has been plenty of people b4 him that could rip him lyrically and tons of people after him that could tear him apart.. He's o-k as an artist but not the greatest..How can you be great when you think 50 cent is great..Hell to the n-o. Nas is great, tupac n b.i.g. is great. pun is great, rakim is great....Eminem is O-k like lil jon says.-1-

^^true. I was just writing what first came to mind..It was a coincidence it looks like it rhymes but it dont.. I think it's called 'sight rhyme'. Thanks for the feedback. What do you think about the content?

I love to write and do audio consisting of poetry and freestyles...Also, I like to play chess... JHU Chess club moving on up in the world.-1-

Just turned 19, Feb 13.. So yippy.-1-

I go to John Hopkins Univ. (JHU)...I have to study all the time at JHU, and the only free time I have is bedtime lol. If I had more time I would write and record more freestyles.

Thanks 4 the reply anyway. It wasn't meant to rhyme. I just played around with some metas and similes.-1-

I'm so sick of Nelly! I went to Best Buy to buy two cds of Nas to finish up my collection of his music and they were all gone....Replaced with 50 Nelly cds...I was so pissed. I hate that people think rap music consists of ..Nelly, Chingy, Ja Rule, and all the other pop artists... They are garbage if you want to listen to REAL rap music buy:Nas, Rakim, Big Pun, 2pac, B.I.G.,...List goes on. I'm tired of people mixing pop with rap it's sounds a mess!!!!

-Ramblings-I speak without sound like the hands of mimesbuild castles out of the sands of timeF* That I never plan to dieSo I detached the hands from timeself-destructive, i poke my own mind's eyeI programmed the signsTo weave the truth out of strands of liesI'm beyond what others analyzedtransfiguring human body cells into white liesCan u understand a mindthat produce images that blurs the cameras' eyesA thought, split the Earth and stand inside99.9 mirrored temperature I'm hell definedMy mind's perfection, perfected, wiseSo i end human life by erasing my own life line Lines I edited out:I'm BaCc touching every human spineUse veins as friendship bracelets to form blood tiesDrop some feed if you don't mind.

This is hil-arious. When i read this i had to tell my college room-mate. The teacher must be new to earth or something.. Php...Pcp....Funny stuff-1-

When I heard he was marrying the women he cheated with on Princess Di i was a little angry. It takes guts to marry ur mistress. I hope he gets stripped of his title...Its most definitely a slap to the late Princess Di memory.-1-

This a good example of jealous people bringing a good person down. I don't think he did this at all. These allegations were made to belittle his character.-1-

I hope my impression left on others,Will have been for the good and,They rejoice when it is time for me,To leave my final impression.^That was a deep stanza. You did something different from the regular end rhyme. I hope to see more from you.-1-

The poem titled 'Is this me?' was really good. You words were filled with emotion. My fav lines were:You have to agree that could never be me.A mind full of fairy tails of how great life will be.But little does she know what lifes true meaning will be.Hope to see more from you.-1-

Illusions and visions flicker in my mind.Reliving my life in the blink of an eye.I see the end coming, knowing I can stop it,I chose not to.^^This part was my favorite. I like how each lined built up to the next one. I didn't think the lack of punctuation mattered...it was like a stream of conscience. I hope to see more from you.-1-