cryptonx 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 click to enlarge i still want to work more on his body and some small details there ...any comments / opinions ? thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Soleq 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Well, my opinion really depends on what this will be used for. Just for personal pleasure, then it's fine no matter what it looks like. However, if it's for a business use, then I have to critique it more seriously. The first thing that pops out is the lack of any hands or feet. Perhaps adding something there would make me think less of a quadruple amputee. Other than that, fine details would be nice, but again, it depends on the application. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
miCRoSCoPiC^eaRthLinG 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Have you considered coming up with another one - except that make the baby a "little" cockeyed - not much, just marginally ?? That'd make it ultra-cute if thats what you want...give it a shot - am not joking Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kaputnik 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 SWEEEET... you've done a good job so far.. the body definately needs work.. The diaper would follow the waist.. its obviously looking like an oval with hughlights. Then the eyebrows, what you have is cool.. personally I'd have gone with a brown dot which I'd smear... that would shape much better (and babies have thin whispy eyebrows that give them the cute look.. :-) All in all .. this is an excellent effort you've go there.. R.A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
szupie 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Nice! Is this done with Photoshop and Flash? Or Illustrator? Is it going to be a wallpaper? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
OpaQue 15 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 The eyebrows might look better if you make it more curve and smooth. The smiley Ads can give you a good idea for a cute face. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kraizii88z 0 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Great! i like the reflection.. but i think the legs could be a little more developed and the eyebrows sort of stand out...maybe a little smudged? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted February 12, 2005 Nice made, try working more on the face of the baby, it's the first thing people actually look on! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cryptonx 0 Report post Posted February 13, 2005 thanks alot ppl some answers and info .@ Soleq it is for personal pleasure but thanks for the suggestions , you'are correct .@ M. Earthling I actualy started it like that but it looked much like a local product mascot here , I wanted it to look a little more original .@ kaputnik Thanks for the comments , I agree with you .. will do that . but on another one I dont like to REDIT stuff i end up screwing it more .@ szupie I hate PhotoShop and I dont use Flash I use Swish MAX but NO this wasnt made with any of these , it was made with Corel PaintShop Pro 9.0 ( A formerly Jasc Psp 9.0 )@ OpaQue Thanks alot , yes I will smudge them a bit .. , btw if Xisto is ur design it's great @ kraizii88z Thanks I will make another one with more details , this was simply some Circles and Eclipses highlighted to give a fake depth look .@ Primius Thanks but I like to keep stuff as minimal as possible ( could be my style ) i dont want to add more details to the face, except fix the eyebrows .thanks alot to all of you again . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
amkint 0 Report post Posted February 13, 2005 good work...the body requires a bit of work.. make the baby a bit more fatter and chubby ;-) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
avalon1405241471 0 Report post Posted February 13, 2005 Nice!The eyebrows need a little work and you should have added cheek bone lines.You may consider to add little dimples to make him even more adorable. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cryptonx 0 Report post Posted February 14, 2005 thanks i like that . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xtron 0 Report post Posted February 15, 2005 criptonx what soft do u use to make those cool avatars and pics in your signatre ?? thanx i'm a n00b in design so do't get angry or anything cheers Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hihihihi88 0 Report post Posted February 16, 2005 good work... the body requires a bit of work.. make the baby a bit more fatter and chubby ;-) <{POST_SNAPBACK}> In my opinion , the body is ok for a lovable look .On the head , I think it can be add around three hairs . The function of the hairs can be creative a motion wave . The baby will be more active . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
harriko 0 Report post Posted February 16, 2005 lol very very cute i see. but it can be a little sharpened, its a bit soft. just need a little something to give a bit of a kick into the picture. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites