electriic ink 1 Report post Posted January 15, 2006 Here's a very simple banner I've created: Rate / comment / criticise Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Plenoptic 0 Report post Posted January 15, 2006 Not bad. Takes a while to read though, people might not sit there just to see what it says. Then again nevermind cause they will probably want to stay and see just exactly it is leading too. Not bad overall, very simple but that is good because you want them to read the text. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted January 15, 2006 Not too bad, but I revised the story!LONG LONG AGO THERE WERE A MAN WHO TRY TO MAKE HIS SITE THE ULTIMATE AND BECAUSE OF HIS SKILLFUL VENTURE, HE WAS IN THE HAPPINESS: TRAP 17 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Richard 0 Report post Posted January 15, 2006 it looks plain could use some color and faster words, other than that its good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
joeblogg 0 Report post Posted October 28, 2008 it's pretty good but its pretty boring. make more color and animation and change the font on the wording. otherwise its cool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Evolke 0 Report post Posted October 28, 2008 Rate / comment / criticiseIts nice, but a little too plain. Perhaps include some images or different transaction between the text eg. Fade, Type. Also try using more creative text, personally I like the look of 3-D Text so if you can get your hands on some with a soft different coloured outline to the inner colour, that could look cool.Maybe include an actually image of a person searching around inside the Banner, randomly climbing up walls and opening doors etc. just to follow the story a little more?Great idea Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
