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Not bad. Takes a while to read though, people might not sit there just to see what it says. Then again nevermind cause they will probably want to stay and see just exactly it is leading too. Not bad overall, very simple but that is good because you want them to read the text.

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Not too bad, but I revised the story!LONG LONG AGO THERE WERE A MAN WHO TRY TO MAKE HIS SITE THE ULTIMATE AND BECAUSE OF HIS SKILLFUL VENTURE, HE WAS IN THE HAPPINESS: TRAP 17

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Its nice, but a little too plain. Perhaps include some images or different transaction between the text eg. Fade, Type. Also try using more creative text, personally I like the look of 3-D Text so if you can get your hands on some with a soft different coloured outline to the inner colour, that could look cool.
Maybe include an actually image of a person searching around inside the Banner, randomly climbing up walls and opening doors etc. just to follow the story a little more?
Great idea :)

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