hulunes 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 i do like this render series especially the cartoon film... i want to make a power shield to protect the render's body but too light and blur a little.i also could not to create the text with more originality anyhow as my newest sig works,show it here. any comment and feedback.thx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cool_Freaker 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 Not bad at all. Well presented anyway (ie not pixellated, render is fine etc etc), albiet not very complex/technical. I don't really like the font though, change it perhaps, and while your at it, try an effect on the actual text (the shadow thing is nice I admit). Maybe blend in the render with some brushing next time as well. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lotrfan 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 I don't really have that much of an artistic touch, but I think that it looks good. I agree that the text could be changed a little to make it look a bit better. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
snlildude87 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 The background makes the robot look...umm...fruity. I mean, look at the way he's making his fist. The background should match his anger. Change it to red or something. Maybe add fire effects. The render needs to blend; so does the text.6/10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saint_Michael 3 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 ok now on to the good ole stuffcolors i would have goen witha red white and blue theme the text i would have gone more tech since it is robotron from tramsformers, and on top of that i would have gone with either a tech border or a tech background. not your best so for maybe some more detail into it and it will look better6.5/10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 The background still kinda seems too pastel-y to be with the Optimus Prime in the front (great render by the way ). But the rest seems like it works. 7/10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnny 1 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 Not bad at all. Well presented anyway (ie not pixellated, render is fine etc etc), albiet not very complex/technical. I don't really like the font though, change it perhaps, and while your at it, try an effect on the actual text (the shadow thing is nice I admit). Maybe blend in the render with some brushing next time as well. 165499[/snapback] Ditto. Mike, I think by Robotron you meant Megatron, which is the bad guy. That's Optimus Prime. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted July 25, 2005 Ditto. Mike, I think by Robotron you meant Megatron, which is the bad guy. That's Optimus Prime. 165601[/snapback] Ahaha. For shame, Michael Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SnXster 0 Report post Posted July 29, 2005 The background is too plain. Get some brushes, i think the background should be blue or red. Also the render needs to be blended, it sticks out to much. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Saint_Michael 3 Report post Posted July 30, 2005 you are right ***gasp*** i never got into transformers it look kind of you know gay so i never really watched and the way they are doing it now in 3d is totally lame. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted July 30, 2005 you are right ***gasp*** i never got into transformers it look kind of you know gay so i never really watched and the way they are doing it now in 3d is totally lame. 167333[/snapback] Pfft. The Transformers were awesome. Transformers - robots in disguise Transformers - more than meets the eye! Autobots wage their battle to destroy the evil forces of The Decepticons! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnny 1 Report post Posted July 30, 2005 Pfft. The Transformers were awesome. 167370[/snapback] Abso.Frickin. Lutely. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
snlildude87 0 Report post Posted July 30, 2005 Pfft. The Transformers were awesome. Transformers - robots in disguise Transformers - more than meets the eye! Autobots wage their battle to destroy the evil forces of The Decepticons! 167370[/snapback] That's...nice to know. Abso. Frickin. Lutely. 167396[/snapback] That's also nice to know. Since we are trailing off-topic, I'm going to close this thread. If you have something to say, PM me and I'll open it up again. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
