DjLuki 0 Report post Posted June 22, 2005 ok here is another one.. i tried to do what Hmmz and JOhnny told me on my last one so this is what i came up with... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnny 1 Report post Posted June 22, 2005 Hm...okay....looks alright this time, but the render's a little TOO blended. The bg is pretty chaotic (which isn't bad, really) so the render is pretty hard to see...try giving it a little saturation back.Also, the text is blended now, but the white gradient kinda "disturbs" it. Try just adding a drop shadow and a white or black stroke at about half opacity...just play around with settings till it blends a little more nicely.But, aside from my obsessive nitpicking, it looks good. You're gettin' better Luki. ^-^ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted June 22, 2005 Not bad. I would saturate the back a bit more, but that's just me. The background is a little bright for the text. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DjLuki 0 Report post Posted June 22, 2005 alright thank you, i did add a 1px stroke to the text but i guess you can't really see it from the gradient. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
elusive-shadows 0 Report post Posted June 22, 2005 That's really cool. Wish I could do stuff like that...right now my background are horrible and and I haven't got the slightest idea how to improve them.Anyway, I'd give it a 8.5 out of 10. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cool_Freaker 0 Report post Posted June 23, 2005 Just a tad monotone also. You should try have the render and/or text slightly (or extremely) different so they stand out more. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DjLuki 0 Report post Posted June 23, 2005 when put a different text color and pick, they tel me to matcht hemw itht he background lol... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
