aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 heres a song i wrote for my band, its not very good but o well.V1. sitting here as time elapseswondering if you will return to mewondering if i have lost you foreverwondering when this will all go awaywondering why you left meC. realizing everything ive doneand how i messed upeverything makes sense as itruns through my head,feeling thefeelings ive felt so many times beforeV2. im sorry for everythingim sorry for huring youim sorry for not understandingplease forgive me for the person that i amdont worry about me, i will be fineC x2ive messed up...forgive me(end)well theres my song, tell me what you like or dont like about it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonorama 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 Well, I'm not a great song writer either, but i think your song is quite sad. I was wondering what kind of music you play for it :PCheers! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 ya, i write songs that are sad and tragic. i wrote it for a rock song. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
guangdian 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 will some one would composed for this song? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 i dont understand what you said Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rejected 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 I think guangdian meant to say something like this..Are you having someone make this into a song? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lordofthesabbath 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 Good song man:), are you the singer or what? And whats your band's name? i wanna hear yall in the future maybe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 ya, my band is gonna make it into a song. Im the bassist in my band, our name is angels of the lost order (where i got my username from) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mysterio 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 Sorry but i dont understand the song. Try to work more on the theme and give us a rythem and it could work out. Also more of a song mabey longer or repeat more stuff. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Becca 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 That's just pure mean. His song was cute. And you can have songs in any style you want and you must have no imagination not to understand it.I reckon you should SING the song, why are there no people SINGING. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lordofthesabbath 0 Report post Posted June 7, 2005 I wish i could sing:( but not every rock song must be long, some of As I Lay Dying's lyrics are about 12 lines, with an average of about 4 words per line, yet they made it last a good amount of time (about 3 1/2 minutes) so yah, it would be cool to post links to mp3's. I wish i had a singer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 8, 2005 and besides the length of the song doesnt matter, the content is the important part. if anyone knows a good website to get fairly inexpensive drums let me know. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
lordofthesabbath 0 Report post Posted June 8, 2005 try http://www.musiciansfriend.com/ or http://www.guitarcenter.com/ guitar center usually has special prices during summer on good brands. Try musicians friend first i recommend it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dragonfly 0 Report post Posted June 8, 2005 Wonderful song, nicely composed. With this kind of lyrics the one you are referring to cannot help but has to forgive you absolutely.. hehe... The song clearly send a message to express that he feels really sorry over the things he'd done in the past and will not repeat it in the future, atleast according to my understanding. In any relationship, there should be one side that could say, "I am sorry." With this if the relationship has to flourish it will, if not then we can call the day. Since you use simple words not phrases and stuffs its easy to understand and can penetrate listeners ear easily... post more of them... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aotlo 0 Report post Posted June 8, 2005 thanks, when i touch up another one i will post it. what are some good drum brands for a new drummer to start with. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
