anwiii 17 Report post Posted August 18, 2010 thought i would share something i wrote after i woke up today....sometimes i want to saysometimes i want to praysometimes i don't know what to sayday after daysometimes i know what's rightsometimes i want to fightsometimes it's a sightday after daythe poisons i feelthe poisons i healhow can i dealday after dayit's a big dealit's how i feellife is realday after daythe masks people wearit's hard to bareit's hard to careday after dayi take withinit ain't no sineven if i don't winday after dayit's worth the fightlike stars at midnightwhat a sightday after dayso people will be goodas they shouldwhile i am misunderstoodday after day Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
web_designer 7 Report post Posted August 21, 2010 i like what you wrote anwiii. deep and strong meanings. keep on writing my friend and post them here to share us your thoughts. 1 kunyuk reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bluefashion 0 Report post Posted October 20, 2010 Great article.Like here ,so much beutiful words! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iAssistant 1 Report post Posted August 10, 2011 Wow! Your poem is nice!It is like a song Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ritu 1 Report post Posted March 2, 2012 I like it because your poem carries a lot of meaning yet very negligible number of voluminous words are used. Poems usually portray the intense feelings of the poet, but use of literary technicalities takes away from it the original flavour , thankfully, you have successfully avoided that. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
