Laschatz.info

[delivi 0]

Hi friends I've created my new website laschatz.info, please provide me any suggestions on improvement of my website.

[serverph 0]

there seems to be nothing much there yet... as i understand from the homepage that it is still under development.

 

in any case, at it's early stages, i have observed some minor things which may need improvement:

a: spelling -- for your site to have a more professional personality to it, double-check on spellings. on your homepage, i believe Amatures is supposed to be Amateurs.

b: grammar -- relative to spelling and projecting a professional site is grammar. "...will be availabe for the public with a few weeks" would be better with slight corrections, namely available and within. i understand that english is not likely your native language, and a little editing help from someone familiar with the language is worth a try. or maybe run your text in MSWord to get a visual prompt of what needs corrections.

c: redundant page contents -- as of this time, privacy.html and terms_of_use.html bear the same content. as they are separate page links, i see your intention is to have separate content for each. maybe just put "Content under development" for the page which is still pending instead of having your site users see the same content on both. or you can decide later on to merge these two together later on as one page, and just modify your links on your site.

d: design -- design-wise, left and right margins seem to be too wide, as compared to the top and bottom margins. unless of course if you intend to add additional content on the left and right margins later on, which would compensate for page balance.

 

keep us informed on future updates. and good luck with your site.

[delivi 0]

thanks serverph for your great helpactually the problem is not with my English, I was concentrating a lot on design making the layout compatible with W3C XHTML Standards.Definitely the final site will not have such mistakes.

[MIGUE2k7 0]

The Desing of your site seems pretty good, the colors fit well, in really, i dont got so much to comment about cause your site hasnt so much content right now.I liked your slogan

[delivi 0]

I've corrected the mistakes and chaged the privacy.html pagePlease kindly provide me suggestions in improving the layout.Also please provide me some categories that you'd like to see.

[Saint_Michael 3]

Although it's just me but your banner needs a border to it, way to blended into the background color. Or use an image that expands the width of the page (don't have a an example to show you) thats behind your header. Like the Contruction image might have to stealbarrow it sometime .

 

If you going for the Professional IT website, then you would have to start with these and build from there.

 

Computers

-Software

-Hardware

-Networking

-Security

-AI

-Viruses

[delivi 0]

Like the Contruction image might have to stealbarrow it sometime .

You can use this image as youwhish as I didnt creat it, I took it from the OLD Blogger Website. It's not there now.

[serverph 0]

ei, delivi! double-check on your links also... there are some links which are apparently "broken" or were not properly linked to. i'll leave that for you to find out hehehe? as there are just a few pages you have there for now.

[delivi 0]

hey friend I've not yet uploaded all my files just testing now, I nned to make sure everything is right before I release the final.

Now I've made 2 layouts please tell me which one to choose and also any suggestions for modifications.

Please view the two layouts here

http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/

http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/

Please dont report about the links I'll only look at them after finilasing the layout.

[delivi 0]

Hey friends please help me, i'll be very grateful to you. I'm in need of suggestions.

Here is my first article http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/

I've made changes as said by Saint_Michael. Please provide a suggestion. I'm running out of time to upload all the articles.

[delivi 0]

hey guys why no one has helped me....

Here I've made new content with a new layout,

http://forums.xisto.com/no_longer_exists/

Please visit and provide me valuable suggestions so that I can improve it, I definitely assure that those who help me will surely be rewarded by some means.

I want your comments on the left side navigation.

Edited January 8, 2007 by delivi (see edit history)

[delivi 0]

bumping post to get attention from members to help me