Opinions Of Small .gif Animation I Did Not much, but its mine, and I like it

[NigaiAmaiYume 0]

VERY small .gif animation I've done. The still part of the image is just a basic doll I made and modified, so not a consideration. The animated paper doll/origami bit is 100% me, though.

 

 

Any thoughts? Suggestions for improvement?

 

Edit: Just realized I need to update this, my hair's no longer this color. ^-^

Edited October 18, 2006 by NigaiAmaiYume (see edit history)

[jlhaslip 4]

Looks like you got your wings clipped someplace along the way.Not being 'angelic' enough lately?

[Saint_Michael 3]

Animation is smooth I wouldn't touch it unless you plan to add more shapes to the animation.

[NigaiAmaiYume 0]

The animation was hand drawn in MSPaint. o_O I'm glad it was so small, less detail to ruin. ^-^ But thanks for the compliment, Saint_Micheal. I'll probably leave it as this.The animation, btw, is based on one of my other user names, "paper_dolls". Hence the paper doll shapes. ^-^jlhaslip: Cropped to fit in a smaller area. Forgot this one is 75X75, I need to dig up my 100X100 version when I decide to redo the hair. Although I like the quip about the wings. ^-^

[serverph 0]

as it is, it's already good. then you winked at me, and it became very good! if you're still gonna modify it some more, maybe experiment on applying multi-colors on your wings... just to add to the details. but then again, as i said, it works well as it is.

[Pedropmp 0]

It looks very nice I think better is impossible only if you cut her wings and rezize them so they can look they are moving

[NigaiAmaiYume 0]

Pedropmp, you're moving too fast for me. That's Step 2, after recoloring the hair. ^-^

[Pedropmp 0]

Pedropmp, you're moving too fast for me. That's Step 2, after recoloring the hair. ^-^

EHEHhe so want me to explain step by step?

[NigaiAmaiYume 0]

It's all right, Pedropmp, I learn better by trial and error than by being lead through step by step. I'll work it out. ^-^Thanks, though.

[keri-j 0]

Ooooo, very pretty. I wish I could create animations and such.... You should put them on a site or gallery.. maybe you have O.o Anyways.. keep it up!

[Florisjuh 0]

It's nice and funny, well done I guess...