iGuest 3 Report post Posted October 2, 2009 to the floorMy Own Rap SongsDown To the floor gonna make you want moreFlying high like the eagles so cleanly soar While Robin hood steals from the rich some more Calling them ***** out the mo?****in door And given what he takes to the very poor Seriously its ****in boring round the clock Watching hours go by tick tock tick tock The aftershock of the earthquake gonna make You shake ya body all over the world for goodness sake Life aint a right its a privilege But I think your abusing that privilege We?re gonna put ya away for the smooth spittin image You?re settin for the little ones, even in the orphanage -reply by corey Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted October 8, 2009 u tryin to grab a girl to bring her to your lip but u cant u to ugly u cant attract girls like me girls lookin at me droolin while I'm poolin I could eazly grab your lady after 5 minutes she goin to start to call me baby u will walk in a shame come back with your mommy and say I'm the blame my girl backs me up and says your lame she took me cause I'm rich u a waste I could take 3000 people for free to the hall of fame another girl come for me and ask me for my name she broke up with u she said u to fat go train mad girls no I'm a player girls don't like boys that live in other peoples layer ya poeple no I'm not wack at rappin come on guys no word what happin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted October 8, 2009 u tryin to grab a girl to bring her to your lip but u cant u to ugly u cant attract girls like me girls lookin at me droolin while I'm poolin I could eazly grab your lady after 5 minutes she goin to start to call me baby u will walk in a shame come back with your mommy and say I'm the blame my girl backs me up and says your lame she took me cause I'm rich u a waste I could take 3000 people for free to the hall of fame another girl come for me and ask me for my name she broke up with u she said u to fat go train mad girls no I'm a player girls don't like boys that live in other peoples layer ya poeple no I'm not wack at rappin come on guys no word what happin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted November 28, 2009 my rapMy Own Rap Songs I post like a fool in the middle of the nightMaths got me down but I'm not goin without a fightThink I cant rhyme worth a dime?Then ask Snoopy and he'll tell you who canIts me slow pokeI aint no jokeCause I roll with the punchesEven though my mommy packs my school lunches! -kayla reply I was bored-reply by kayla Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted December 13, 2009 diss iguestMy Own Rap SongsIguest u think u can rapReally now everything u tlk bout is crapSayin u get girl wen u kno u sit on guys lapsWen u kno your girl cheatin on u when I f**ked her behind ya backNext was your mom and I gave her an anxiety attack.But I guess this isnt itWanna kno yBc u poped out right between her thighsThis was imfamousHit me up on myspace @Myspace.Com/gboro09-reply by imfamous Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
armynavy123 0 Report post Posted December 13, 2009 hey i m new to this forum. i just wanted a platform 2 post ma creations so i landed up here .anyone who can grant life(music) to my lyrics i'll b very thankful............so here goes ma songFLOPPED BUT GALLOPEDFor a second Yeah! just for a second Imagine yourself as a lost rapperwhen u have to fight your worst fearswhen u need to move on while everyone sneerswhen your welcome is done with cans of beersnow thats the place to control your tears n u need to smile on stage ,no matter if u are filled with rageto the top but you need not stopyour knees shouldn't dropyour breathe shouldn't blockcuz believe it or not but u haven't flopped.there is always hope as u may have seen in daily soapsu gotta be the person who is already dead but who'll come back againjust to shoot ya in head.now go to your bed n think of that bet which ya made with your friendbut lost instant.wake up,do i need to shake ya up??just go for a fast n raise your mastn prepare yourself for the biggest nuclear holocaust.revise you rhymes as many timesas you may hear the tinkling of chimes.travel back for the crowd is waitingnot for your song but to screw you off if u again start shaking.just accumulate your energy like Mamta Banerjeen start your rap,don't make it look like crap.it should be clear n loud n not down n out.but that doesn't mean that u will shout.show them middle finger if they start their gigglen soon u'll see that they are ready to mingle.u won't believe its actually happeningthat u are actually rappingn there will be no devil with its teeth snapping.i know the crowd is dense but don't be tenseyour song is immense n look! they have crossed the fence.they are hugging u, they are kissing unot kicking or hissing ya.just leave them there n run up that stair.n go to your friend who is kinda bendn know what , he is wet with sweatcuz man..............YOU HAVE WON THE BET. Wow. I think this is kind of a cliche but is pretty good. It has a really good ring to it! Altough I was crackign up while reading it. "n there will be no devil with its teeth snapping" LOL! Overall 7/10. Keep it up! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
index.html 0 Report post Posted December 13, 2009 (edited) I hear the faint rap but I would say that what you wrote is very cool but who'll believe the Internet can be copied and everything and claim that yours is extra, I would like to see if the course is straight and video for this so if not your problem when you have to give me a video link to see Edited December 13, 2009 by index.html (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted January 4, 2010 My rapMy Own Rap SongsThe story of the beginningEverybody?s always tellin? me how this world was createdAll these different stories, man ? I just hate it.Day and night I be lookin? out at the sky thinking,Science or religion?They both got a point but very different visions,Now was the time I made ma decision:So I searched it up in the book of wisdom,And here we go, I came to the conclusion:This aint no dictatorship, man it?s just a hatershipWell at least that?s what God sed to Satan,For giving all his angels ****.And so satan said to him ?I was made from fire?,?The angels was made from clay.??God, you can throw me outa heaven but ima fulfil my darkest desires??Ima make my own way?And God said to him: ?jus u w8 till judgement day?Satan began his dirty work on us people,By tryna spread an evil disease,Told em? to eat from the forbidden apple tree,Yo, I mean Adam and Eve.They were thrown outa the heavens too,God forgave em? but told em? to live on the earth,Then she gave birth - and the human race startedBegan with all the prophets of God,And here we came after they parted.And yo, thas the story of how the world was started.This aint no dictatorship, man it?s just a hatershipWell at least that?s what God sed to Satan,For giving all his angels ****.And so satan said to him ?I was made from fire?,?The angels was made from clay.??God, you can throw me outa heaven but ima fulfil my darkest desires??Ima make my own way?And God said to him: ?jus u w8 till judgement day?Now listen up don?t confuse me with a *BLEEP*, am not black am paki man.I chosen my way, my God and ma religionModern way of life, Allah, Islam and all my future visions.And don?t be hatin? on me, thas my own decisionAnd I aint stoppin?, aint givin? up hope,Until I reach the top, top of the globeEveryone else stuck sellin? crack thinking dey don?t have another way,Man dey aint gunna last, and it?s all ****in? dope!This aint no dictatorship, man it?s just a hatershipWell at least that?s what God sed to Satan,For giving all his angels ****.And so satan said to him ?I was made from fire?,?The angels was made from clay.??God, you can throw me outa heaven but ima fulfil my darkest desires??Ima make my own way?And God said to him: ?jus u w8 till judgement day?Yo I aint doin dis alone, dey call me W-Desi-BAnd am all up in here reppin for em? desi comm unity,Don?t know wat desi is?Man I aint got time to explain,Type it up mayn, google it or summtainYa don find it, man thas a shame,Gaad Daym!Hate me or love me,Either way I'm recognisedBut one day, wen I reach the top, u gunna be thinkin?What a perfect plan I devisedYou gunna be hatin yaself for it was me u dislikedBut whilst u still der hatin? I'm up top all wisePhilthy rich, thas ma prise,And u still down der, only jus realised:I'm hatin on ya now, I got braggin rights,Bentleys, Bimmers, and am rollin? wiv all em bright lights.This is my way and it paid off, yano, u ruined your life.If you want me cum get me, il be right here, runnin ma own enterpriseB rememberin:This aint no dict ator ship, man - it?s just a hater shipThis aint no dict ator ship, man - it?s just a hater shipThis aint no dict ator ship, man - it?s just a hater shipHATERSHIP -reply by W-Desi-B Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted January 11, 2010 my rapMy Own Rap SongsWalkin down the street wit my *BLEEP* drec.Poundin on these *BLEEP*s oops I mean wiggas.Riddin down the stree wit my 24 spinnin lookin in my trunk like what r u playin.Bass so loud u can hear it humin.Kush so strong u can smell me comin.I chill wit my *BLEEP* his names drec.We be smokin every time we roll up on your block.Tryin to get this ***** to **** r cocks.We just hitta wit the glock then pull on out.-reply by jersey forsythe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ahmed_mmahmoud 0 Report post Posted January 26, 2010 good workbut to be different try some thing new in the raptake this hint and tell me if i'm wrong:* the rap lyrics contain short words (due to fast temp) that's why they use slang language and lose a part of audience.TRY TO USE NORMAL LENGTH OF WORDS (ORDINARY AND COMMON USED WORDS)that will make you different , decent and famousGood Luck Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted February 4, 2010 BrianMy Own Rap Songsaey yo I ryhem so tight they say my lyrics are white but I keep brothas feelin they right so much flow ta make a acapala sound cold make cops drop when I cruze up on the block glock cocked time ta pop bustas runnin they dam mouths they ain't been pound in the ground I make stlye look mo fad load my mag time ta tag fagz die bye nine mind so blind I can't see if I'm ryhem or putten in 2 much timen hope 4 a spot ta make hotshots come up out they plot maken mo dough then ya average huslter maken myself Bri look so fly then the rienin rains chains cover they neck but chains cover my wrisk so **** the softs I'm comen out harder than a boulder 2 much **** on shoulder got me stressed I can't rest so I try my best but the west got me wearin a vest ta protect won't hesistate ta put 2 the cheat an 1 in the head rest in the dead cuz u ****en feds can't catch a thug in the slumps u call it but I call it home so I'm goin hotter than the summer 2 much haters not a lotta lovers but **** the haters love 2 the suppota yeah my name Brian a.K.A Bri just a lil ryhem I thought of in school so I'm white but I hope my ryhems are right so there ya have -reply by Brian Hennen Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antwan 0 Report post Posted February 16, 2010 My?lifewhen?I?wake?up?I?have?a?feeling?of?gloommy?parents?are?fighting?downstairs?so?I?go?the?bathroomwhen i see?my?faceI?know?that?I'ma?disgracebecause?I?pop?pills?and?smoke?weedmy?parents?don't?understand?that?this?is?what?I?needI'm?tired?of?them?judgin?me?nudgin?metrying?to?make?me?something?I?don't?wanna?be!!!so?I?go?to?my?room?and?say?I?don't?give?a?*BLEEP*I?don't?need?you?dad?I?wanna?be?stuck?in?the?muckI?like?gettin?high?I?don't?need?to?liedon't?give?me?a?sigh?I?only?want?you?to?die!!!I?hate?the?way?you?treat?me?every?day?you?end?up?beatnin?meso?I'll?say?it?againI'd?rather?live?with?michael?Jackson*BLEEP*?you?dad?don't?get?madI?know?I'm?the?son?you?don't?wanna?havbut?it's?okI?won't?change?my?wayI'll?live?life?like?it's?my?last?dayschools?the?only?place?that?I?enjoycause?when?I?come?home?you?try?to?employthat?I'm?a?screw?up?a?*BLEEP*?up?a?motha?*BLEEP*ing?stonerso?I?go?to?the?bathroom?and?whack?off?my?big?bonersingings?the?only?way?to?express?how?I?feel?cause?when?I?try?to?tell?you?dad????[/tab][tab]?you?don't?think?it's?realbut?I?still?care?that?your?having?an?affairwith?a?*BLEEP*?named?Sarahbut?you?better?beware?she?might?cause?dispairand?make?you?swearand skin her from her hairso?dad?this?goodbyeI?don't?wanna?lieI?don't?wanna?cryI?don't?wanna?try?anymorego?marry?ms.?drew?Barrymore?I'm?tired?of?hearing?your?voiceso?I?will?rejoicewhen?I?leave?home?and?I?get?stonedthen?get?some?domethrough?a?phoneand?go?get?a?loanso?I?can?buy?some?more?hydrocodonewhen?I?get?sleepy?eyed?I?dream?about?suicideand?how?I?wanna?be?killed?by?syanideor?jump?out?a?plane??and?when?my?body?hits?the?groundmy?organs?flyand?this?is?how?I?wanna?die?*BLEEP*?you?daddon't?get?madI?know?I'm?the?son?you?don't?wanna?havbut?it's?okI?won't?change?my?wayI'll?live?life?like?it's?my?last?day-Antwan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted March 3, 2010 hi my name is shakira and I have a rap about my haterz please give good comments!! yo I walk the halls of richneck elementary,all my haterz wanna be jus like me,u touch meh I'll mess u up completly,when I come around kids get scared of meh,I'm illy,my haterz know day cant beat meh,I'll rearrange your face seriously,my swagg so fresh I walk right pass u,your scared to death,u try to run,u can run but u cant hide and when I find u be ready to die,I know I'm a very young girl but dats how it is in my world I'm a gangsta girl,don't hate meh becuz I wasnt who u thoght I was or who u wanted meh to be cause from start to finish u never knew the real me,haterz on hate the things thay cant get and the people day cant be cuz like I said my haterz wana be like meh,girls lookin meh up and down and don't have nothing to say but its funny how the words come out when I walk away yea she think she all dat yea dats wat dey say but I don't worry about it cuz dae don't have the guts to face meh anyway...If u hate me or wat I'm reppin then hit d door and get the steppin. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vsharma72 0 Report post Posted March 16, 2010 (edited) I think that all of these songs are awesome.I really like the one by brandon he can rap.But watz going on with people do people ever go on tis website,if you do please reply I want to see if you like the songs to! MAXIFRESH out!! Edited March 16, 2010 by rvalkass (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted April 2, 2010 call me your princess yes I'm the best I'm on the level above ya u cant even touch my bubble I'm about too rock the stands u don't even have a man I'm like the sunshine I'm gonna make u blind Share this post Link to post Share on other sites