HmmZ 0 Report post Posted May 25, 2005 what do you think? and what could be improved? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cool_Freaker 0 Report post Posted May 26, 2005 In my opinion, the colours don't seem to match too well. There's yellow on the top left, but the little logo thing is blue/pink? Then the overall thing is a black/grey? I think it should be more uniform throughout - go with a tech, black/grey feel throughout, perhaps with yellow, or implement more blue and pink. The text "Combine simplicity and style" needs to be straight - parallel with scanlines in my opinion, tech with angled text doesn't work too well.The link buttons really need a new font, it currently doesn't fit with the banner. I don't particuarly like the grey colour either, or how it's bevelled... I think to go with the actual banner, the buttons should be smaller, in a more tech-like font, with less bevel, perhaps even just on the banner themselves. Probably don't have the links bar standing in front of the banner.If you could put a bit of yellow on that abstract feature on the right it may fit in better also... anyway, lookin' good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tyssen 0 Report post Posted May 26, 2005 I don't like the angle on 'combine simplicity & style' - it just looks wrong particulary as you've got horizontal lines behind it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Damann 0 Report post Posted May 26, 2005 Yeh the angle on the words makes it look pretty bad and the font should look better Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnny 1 Report post Posted May 28, 2005 Cool Freaker has great advice on most graphics projects, and on this one he pretty much said everything I would, and more, so I'll just agree with him.You're off to a good start though. You have the right idea. Keep heading in the same direction. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
karlo 0 Report post Posted May 28, 2005 How did you do that to be so artistic? How did you criticize that graphic? You know what fonts to use, what colors to use, etc... How can I be artistic? Because i think i have no creativity Share this post Link to post Share on other sites