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Poem: Untitled Here we go

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I'm not sure what to make of it... I'm persuming it's describing someone, the words used are good... overall the poem is alright, but kind of short I guess or maybe this kind of structure is supposed to be like that. All the same, good work :(

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Hmm... I'm not sure about the overall impression... But it is quite good =). I'm just not a fan of short poems =X

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Well , in my opinion, it is hard for me to write a true poem.Cause ,i think a real poem should obey some basic princiles.A true peom should contain these elements:Peotical image(the picture in words);Rhythm(the musical flow of language);Foot;syllable;stree... ... Foot-- ----monometer,dimeter,trimeter,tetrameter,pentameter,hexameter,heptameter,octameter...Rhythm:------jambus,trochee,anapaest,dacty... ....Rhyme:-------single/male rhyme;double/femal rhyme/triple tryme,etc... If ignore the above rules , the stuff we crecate is nothing but some irreglated words ...

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