Several Of My Poems dedicated to my crush

[miladinoski 1]

I'd like to hear your opinion on the poems I wrote for the girl I have a crush on, so to choose one of them (more will follow) to send it to her :wub:

 

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Truth

 

Looking like an angel fallen from the skies,

Still yet, such a clich? can't describe your eyes.

But never mind my clich?d phrases,

Just know, I'm still thinking of you

Not a second, not a moment more or less

I waste time on stuff with which I don't bother,

I'll give you one single clue

For you to guess

Why you're the only person that makes me with poems to smother.

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Feelings

 

Grey man shivering again in his bed,

Thinking about someone

Knowing everything he has in this strange land,

Is just a lovely sight

So cute, so bland

He can't resist the urge

For it to fight.

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Thoughts

 

Thinking of you,

Blows my mind away,

Release me from my pain,

Ahh, let me love you

Let my love not go vain

Oh please, I beg and pray

Love me and near you

Let me stay,

Let me stay.

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Desire

 

How can you look so desirable when I look at you,

You notice my blank glare.

How can you be so calm when I talk to you,

You notice my stupid dare.

How can your smile look so sincere

You notice my silly stare.

But you still can't notice my love,

I fade and disappear.

 

Why can't you feel it

Why can't you see it

Stop wasting my time,

I want your heart to be mine.

[mahesh2k 0]

Nice. Didn't knew you write poems. *hive 5* ..

[anwiii 17]

i like the last on....

[armynavy123 0]

I'd like to hear your opinion on the poems I wrote for the girl I have a crush on, so to choose one of them (more will follow) to send it to her

 

---

Truth

 

Looking like an angel fallen from the skies,

Still yet, such a cliché can't describe your eyes.

But never mind my clichéd phrases,

Just know, I'm still thinking of you

Not a second, not a moment more or less

I waste time on stuff with which I don't bother,

I'll give you one single clue

For you to guess

Why you're the only person that makes me with poems to smother.

---

Feelings

 

Grey man shivering again in his bed,

Thinking about someone

Knowing everything he has in this strange land,

Is just a lovely sight

So cute, so bland

He can't resist the urge

For it to fight.

---

Thoughts

 

Thinking of you,

Blows my mind away,

Release me from my pain,

Ahh, let me love you

Let my love not go vain

Oh please, I beg and pray

Love me and near you

Let me stay,

Let me stay.

---

Desire

 

How can you look so desirable when I look at you,

You notice my blank glare.

How can you be so calm when I talk to you,

You notice my stupid dare.

How can your smile look so sincere

You notice my silly stare.

But you still can't notice my love,

I fade and disappear.

 

Why can't you feel it

Why can't you see it

Stop wasting my time,

I want your heart to be mine.

Very nice. It kind of sounds like a vampire made it but it is really a poem to the heart.