Italian Poem my personal poem

[Hirishiolo 0]

Here my poem written a lot of time ago:Come un alba di bacio io posso lasciarti,come un attimo di passione io posso abbandonarti,come un lieve soffio di vita posso allontanarti...ma ormai lo so, la mia vita ? con te!Do you like it?

[Hirishiolo 0]

Another little poem that I create today:CERCARE,in albe vuote un qualcosa che si ? perso per poiVAGARE,senza un senso trascinata dalla noia diVIVERE,senza averti qui di fianco perRESPIRARE,la bellezza della vita...

[serverph 0]

if only most of us could understand your poems, then perhaps we can learn to like them. :)from the construction, it's like a single verse, not a complete poem. unless it's something like a haiku... is it?

[Hirishiolo 0]

well, I can try to translate my poems in English...I hope to translate even the sense.... ...The translation of the last one is:LOOK FOR,in empty sunrise something that I lost forWANDER,without a sense dragged on the tedium ofLIVE,without you next to me forBREATHE,the beauty of the life...

[Hirishiolo 0]

I can try to translate the second poem that I wrote...I say I try... ...this is the translation:like a sunrise kiss I can leave you like a moment of passion I can abandon you,like a little breathe of life i can get you out of the wayBut I know that my life is with you...What do you think about??

[Archangel_Baw 0]

i think they are great, I understand some Portugues, Itallian, Spanish & French so I just wanted to let everyone else know that to litterally translate either of these 4 languages, it comes out backwards, kind of like french.In english we describe an object Before stating the name of it, in the 4 languages listed above the opposite is true. hope it helps:)