doomforge 0 Report post Posted December 26, 2006 A while ago my friend came over and after a while we got bored so we looked up gangster terms and wrote a poem/rap .)GangsterYo hommiesGive me some berries (money)in tens and twenties'sElse you'll get pooped (killed)YO!give me some joecuz im not emomy pants ain't tightand i have a whiteYO!i'll give you a harlem sunset (fatal knife wound)cuz i have a BIG debtso ya's thats the poem/rap you might think its retarded but i thought it was funny Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Cesto Ode 0 Report post Posted April 22, 2007 ermm.... :| ... Intresting, keep up the...good...work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
narutorasengan17 0 Report post Posted April 28, 2007 lol, sorry to say....but ive seen much better raps with much better flow, though keep practicing, ull get better...some day... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
robocz033 0 Report post Posted April 28, 2007 very choppy. kinda hard to follow. definitely work on that, lol Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted May 13, 2008 Ummm.. Idk it sounds kinda lame but yet I againn I see where its going!! all I gotta say is keep it up and some day you guys will be better!!LOL!!-reply by la_smiley_13 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted May 19, 2008 why do you have very weak poems ? Gangster Poem  My opinion is you should all add a poem about your life instead of these poems on this web site.  -reply by terry famiano Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Josti 0 Report post Posted June 16, 2008 >The one Doomforge wrote<Reminds me of a vid on youtube of Cypress Hill - Hits from the Bong live; a guy inhales from the bong on the stage. Great song and actually chill poem, dun like gangster things but not minded that this time. It has to bring a feeling to the listener/reader and it bringed me the feeling of a live act of Cypress Hill Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
exemption 0 Report post Posted July 2, 2008 Gangsta????????? LOL ROTFLOL Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted September 15, 2008 Can Anyone Help Me Write/Compose A Mc/Rap Song Plz? Gangster Poem  Its mc/rap/gangsta/rnb So far I have  I can do any track whether its rap or indie I'm bursting on the scene at the age of 18, Yet I write bars like new routine And I'm not no teen I'm as funny as mr bean sometimes On the mic I'm 2 keen  I WOULD BE GREATFULL FOR ANY HELP THANKS  -question by Passer Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Manly man 0 Report post Posted September 18, 2008 Postin' everday,tryin'ta' get my *bleep*ing pay,Roll back in my chairand sip some chardonnay coz I'm the trap gangster,school time prankster,try to flame my threads,Imma have to *bleep*ing shankya'.This thread has no flow,this thread has no soul,your insignificant raps are like an unsightly mole,it's my role, the gangster, this is what I am,please release me and let me do the plan,I'm the man, the dog, the M A N lee, kickin' all your nasty butts like *bleep*ing Bruce Lee.DAMN! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Casual Tank 0 Report post Posted September 28, 2008 Better than what I could do. Nice job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mark48 0 Report post Posted October 7, 2008 Its ok i spose Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
bizaque 0 Report post Posted October 23, 2008 ohhh... it so hard guys Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
harrison858 0 Report post Posted October 31, 2008 A while ago my friend came over and after a while we got bored so we looked up gangster terms and wrote a poem/rap .)GangsterYo hommiesGive me some berries (money)in tens and twenties'sElse you'll get pooped (killed)YO!give me some joecuz im not emomy pants ain't tightand i have a whiteYO!i'll give you a harlem sunset (fatal knife wound)cuz i have a BIG debtso ya's thats the poem/rap you might think its retarded but i thought it was funny I rate the rap 3.5/10, here are my reasons:- It dosent quite flow- Dosent really make sense.But dont worry, If you keep practicing, and getting more rhymes it should get better in no time. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
joeblogg 0 Report post Posted November 6, 2008 ha lol. good job man keep up the good work. i can't rap for nuts so yeah your doing a good job. all rappers had to start somewhere right? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites