shadowx 0 Report post Posted November 26, 2006 Im feeling quite bored and in a lovey mood and this is what happens when you add those things together The rocky peaks riseinfront of usSunlight glimmers like a haloontop each peak.The sky is orange, pink...red and purpleReflected in the brilliant blueof your radiant eyes.The few clouds up highare guilded by the sun's goldparralled by the glint of your golden-shine hair. A gentle breeze flicks your hairand shapes the clouds into streaksit coos in the mountain topsalmost as soothing as your voicethe water in the distancelaps gently at the cliffssoftly it brushes landbut not as soft as your touchThe sun sets behind the hillsAs our eyes close slowlyFingers touch, hands joinas we kiss for the first time. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------It hasnt got a title yet, thats why its untitled , it is about somone in particular so i could use their name maybe... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
missalex 0 Report post Posted August 6, 2010 This gives readers a very pretty view of the scenery and all, I think this was a nice poem. Also, you must have been really bored. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
