Put Yourself In My Position [by Johnny]

[Johnny 1]

Thanks.

[husker 0]

I agree with Cool Freaker. You definately need a chorus. Great lyrics though, you could really expand on this and make it into what you want. Good work.

[zerogravity 0]

yo! your lyrics could b incorporated into a rap song.me and my rapper buddies have reviewed it and have a few suggestions(ok a lot!). ur song was ok.u really need to improve.best of luck.