Ashy 0 Report post Posted May 14, 2006 I made 2 version i choose the 2nd one better ^.^ Although the box in the second one might ruin or spoil it it but which do you think better? First one or Second? oh yeah one more... i could make it on another background like on grunge or w/e but the render won't fit ;_; cause of the beam lights on the render.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Albus Dumbledore 0 Report post Posted May 14, 2006 i like the first one, i think it looks better without the grid lines through them etc...but good job on it! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Johnny 1 Report post Posted May 14, 2006 I like the second one better, but if the boxes were just on the bg and not the render, it'd look even better. Also, there's a bit too much white in that one spot. Maybe lower it or brush over it or something. That's a hot render though. <3 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BEagle 0 Report post Posted May 14, 2006 I prefer the second one too, although i think the white is ok, looks great, but i agree the boxes should be on BG and not render would look mint m8 GJ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kryptic 0 Report post Posted May 18, 2006 Its a alittle to blan the render needs to be blened in more the text needs alot of work and the bg is a little plane. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites