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My New Song Feedback please

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It's all right. Sounds a little cheesy though with the lines about "loyalty beyond recognition", but other than that, hey. Lot better than I could do. I like the general meaning but the wording could be different. Don't get me wrong - you do it very well in a few areas (particularly the shorter lines) but run through it a few more times to make sure it's unified throughout.Good job!

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