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Poem I Made Yesterday Night

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this is just a short poem i made last night:

 

Where does love exually park?

as for some of us its light,

and for others its dark.

Love, for everyone different to see,

as we adapt, to what we want love to be.

Some want it fast,

others slow.

Maybe love needs time to grow.

Sometimes we even end up quick,

as we see your love spiral down, like a burning stick.

Thinking when will i find 'That One',

remembering you thought you found it, when you just past love begon.

As the myth of the 'One Love' grows old,

It is in our hearths where its only beginning to unfold.


so did you like it?

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I like it.And it does touch a good point on how everyone just see love differently. I mean, just your poem say some want it slow and some want it fast.I wonder if for you, you want it slow or fast. To me, slow but not too slow. Normal? Maybe ahahh.

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for someone who doesn't speak fluent english you did very well, and even when you did mis-spell something it was easy to see what you meant. Very nice work, I like how you worded it.

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