wassie 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2005 this is just a short poem i made last night: Where does love exually park? as for some of us its light, and for others its dark. Love, for everyone different to see, as we adapt, to what we want love to be. Some want it fast, others slow. Maybe love needs time to grow. Sometimes we even end up quick, as we see your love spiral down, like a burning stick. Thinking when will i find 'That One', remembering you thought you found it, when you just past love begon. As the myth of the 'One Love' grows old, It is in our hearths where its only beginning to unfold. so did you like it? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dvalkass 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2005 That's a very nice poem, well done on making it. How long did it take? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wassie 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2005 4 minutes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
floresid 0 Report post Posted November 1, 2005 Pretty cool, good job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jlhaslip 4 Report post Posted November 1, 2005 Hearths or Hearts? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wassie 0 Report post Posted November 2, 2005 lol... i'm not english, my grammar isn't perfect Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
boy-thoj 0 Report post Posted October 17, 2007 I like it.And it does touch a good point on how everyone just see love differently. I mean, just your poem say some want it slow and some want it fast.I wonder if for you, you want it slow or fast. To me, slow but not too slow. Normal? Maybe ahahh. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyweapon 0 Report post Posted October 18, 2007 sounds awesome. cant believe it didnt take longer.good job. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mc05w37 0 Report post Posted October 19, 2007 that's too straight.. btw, it's nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hirishiolo 0 Report post Posted December 28, 2007 very nice!good job! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Archangel_Baw 0 Report post Posted March 25, 2008 for someone who doesn't speak fluent english you did very well, and even when you did mis-spell something it was easy to see what you meant. Very nice work, I like how you worded it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites