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My Songs... First Song...

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As you might have guessed, I am a big fan of Bloc Party, and my songs are inspired by them, so when I think of them in my head they have the same kind of sound to Bloc Party's sound.

 

This song doesn't really have a name, I just called it "Today", so I hope you enjoy the songs to come...

 

 

 

Today

 

Looking through the window of success

Satring into the mirror of distress

Everything seems like such a mess

 

Seeing my reflection in the cars

Walking past the noisy clubs and bars

Recognising the person who walk past

 

The streets are empty

But the company is plenty

 

Walking around the streets at the dead of night

Don't know whats round the corner, a mugger, mugged or fight

 

I'm the only one out and the feels that way

I'm a walker by night and a sleeper by day

I didn't do anything to make it that way

 

And the streets are empty

But the company is plenty

 

It's 3AM and I don't feel tired

I feel so alive, energetic and wired

 

I'm walking the streets and there's no one to stop me

I can do what I want I'm absolutely free

 

And the streets are empty

But the company is plenty

 

I wonna be alone as I walk the way home

The road maybe dark, but I'm in the zone

 

The street lights are flickering

And the trees are whistling

 

And the streets are empty

But the company is plenty

 

I don't feel frightened or scared

I lay myself out bare

 

I see a shadow but there's no one there

It could be a psycho but I don't really care

 

Because the streets are empty

and the company is plenty

 

I could walk around for 10 or 20

The lights don't work but the darkness welcomes me

 

I wonna walk around for hours without disturbance

But in the 24 hours there has to be an allowence

 

Because the streets are empty

and the company is plenty

 

And although I don't want it the sun begins to rise

The people come-out and my passion dies

 

I will stop walking when the time is right

But I will be roaming the streets again by tonight.

 

This message was edited by Bloc Party on Sep 24 2005.

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It's nice, doesn't have too much of a feel for it though. It looks like you were only trying to make things rhyme because they don't go rhythmically for the most part. The song title is never or rarely mentioned throughout the song.So...yeah, the concept is nice, but the meaning's just flowing past me.

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nice rhyming structure and all but I don't get what it's about I know it'ssomething about walking down a street but I don't get it . I don't know if you've done this just to make everything rhyme or you wanted it like that. I like bloc party btw but they are a mainstream band so... :S

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Yeah, it rhymes, alot. But sometimes, you don't have to make all the endings rhyme like that. If you think of something good to put in, and it fits, put it in. Put more feelings into it. :ph34r:

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Yeah :ph34r: I like my songs to rhyme, I do that allot.

 

Here's just another, hope to write more

 

 

 

Spirit

 

It's hiding in your head

It's sleeping in your bed

It keeps you alive

It's keeps your drive

 

It's hiding in your head

Sleeping in your bed

 

Following you home, behind lamp-posts

Watching you silently, like a ghost

It controls your mind

It with you your whole life

 

It's as warm as your heart

It's as warm as your heart

It's a peice of contruction, a work of art

 

It's hiding in your head

Sleeping in your bed

 

It's a part of your mind

It's ladder for your dream

It helps you see things you never have seen

It fights of nightmares, like a knight

It heals and cares for you, after a fight

 

It survives for live

Even when your are dead

It's hiding in your head

Sleeping in your bed

 

Your spirit will leave you

But never forget you

Floating the way you used to walk home

It becomes your ghost

It remembers your mind

It remembers your life

 

Your spirit was a part of you

And knows you well

As long as behind a lamp-post it dwells

Your body will never be forgoten

 

It's still alive

Even though your body died

It remembers your head

It still Sleeps in your bed

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