lalan1 0 Report post Posted August 30, 2005 (edited) It began as all fires do,a spark soon ignited into a blaze of warmth and colourful delight.You held my hand, became my friend,earned my trust and my future once again looked bright.Loneliness turned to hope,emptiness filled up with dreams.Hunger was satisfied, and the darkness lit by love's moonbeams.Tears no longer hit the ground,they fall on your loving shoulder.I feel younger,as our love grows older.When sorrow leaves me wilted as a sun-parched rose,your comfort is a river that flows and flows.The sun's light, the morning dew,they are all the beauty that is you.When passion ebbs,as tides do,love fills the wake,and carries us through.Your strength is as the oak,but if it is my need you bend like the willow.My heart is filled,like a lucky sail with wind to billow.Harsh cold winters,wet springs, blissful summer heat, and the fall of time,They'll weather my spirit,with grace and peace, your hand in mine.Our love's sweet creations, joyous children,blessed am I thanks to God and you.What greater beauty could shed light,on the love that came from two.Love's sweet reflection,laughing, growing, thriving, learning.Words cannot express what my heart feels,how strong my love is burning.When God took one home,I felt my heart would never again see the sun.But you, my love, walked with me, through the sadness,and together we share the memories that keep our family one.The lines of age will etch their mark on usand time will take the strength from our bodies.But love's brush will paint for us a picture of such beauty,That a hundred lifetimes could not remove their glory.- K. Brook - Notice from Becca: Hello there.. seen as your a fairly new member.. I would like to make a note that if any content in your post is NOT yours then you must quote it and post the link to where you got it from..Anyways this part of the forum is where you create your own stuff not copy and paste... Edited August 30, 2005 by Becca (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sxyloverboy 0 Report post Posted August 30, 2005 wow did you write that yourself or did you get it from a website? i think ive see it somewhere before... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
seruius 0 Report post Posted August 31, 2005 gosh............ =othis made me think....that's just beautiful. did you do that yourself?!?this kind of poetry makes me want to... never mind.well, keep up the good work!!! i look forward to reading more of your works!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites