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hehehe, im not quite sure the song is gramatically well written;

 

++ CAKE IT ++

 

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care, if she dont care (x2)

 

my mummie told me she's the one

but im only the hald of one

you know im calling all this time

but you can't even take the phone

 

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care, if she dont care (x2)

 

and i relaize that you've been watched

by a boy whose parents are

the wealthy of the paramount

he wants to show you that he's cool

 

and i all i want to do

is take a piece or two...

 

CAKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care,

i dont care, if she dont care (x4)

 

Hopefully you guys like it, it is for my band EVANSS

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hey, you got the song :rolleyes: but your site link isnt working. do you have a sample audio record?? if we can listen, it would be better.. :lol: keep writing..

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sorry, the correct link is http://www.evanss.org/

 

and yeah, we have a couple of recorded songs already, look at the site for further details. Thanks for ur comment , i will look at ur website now :D

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i can see why you were apprehensive of the grammar in your song. forget that and we have a pretty cool song ;-) just downloaded it. lets be frank, its OK. but i think you would be going

i dont care,i dont care,
i dont care,

right now

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sorry, the correct link is http://www.evanss.org/

 

and yeah, we have a couple of recorded songs already, look at the site for further details. Thanks for ur comment , i will look at ur website now :lol:

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wow, you guys are rock! i went through ur site. but i cant read all those mean!! :rolleyes: what language is that anyway?

i like the rocking drum of your band, especially and all three demo songs are nice..how many pieces of ur band?

 

hit me after finished recording of the above song.. agian write more!!

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