Hannah Adams A poem I wrote for my girlfriend.

[emachinest3256 0]

Hannah AdamsThere is a girl at school I knowwho's graceful and divine.She looks very radiant,her hair smells sweet as pine.Who is this girl I?m speaking of?Well, her name is Hannah.Her lovely name means ?grace of God?and she?s as sweet as manna.She glistens like the morning dewon a cold Autumn day.Her deep blue eyes could charm the moonthat is so far away.Her favorite color?s lime green andher favorite show?s Spongebob.She plays the ?lectric guitar whichwill someday be her job.Hannah is as perfect as anOmega Molecule.Therefore, if you see an imperfection,you?re a fool.

[BuffaloHelp 24]

How sweet! I like it very much. Although I wonder if the title should have just been, "Hannah"Would you think it was too personal by revealing someone else's last name (even maybe without her permission)? I don't know. But just saying, "Hannah" brings more of mystery and your puppy love for this girl.Excellent.

[JaVe 0]

Sound's like a beatles song...'hannah', i think it rhymes a little too much but still it's cool.

[fable_geddes 0]

Dude that is so ko0l do you think u could send the same thing to my pm except the name annie

[quiksilver 0]

Wow.. that is a really good poem. Are you going to give it to her?My poems are terrible.

[Donegal 0]

poem = kick.*bottom*.Slightly put off by the omega...stuff part.. otherwise.. *thumbs up* unless, you like, write poems like a sentence.. in which case.. *thumbs up*

[icey 0]

cool poem!

[adamfleming10 0]

cool poem. very sweet