Renewal Prayer This kinda religious, but feedback would be appreciated

[lordofthesabbath 0]

Renewal PrayerRefine this vessel and reconcileThis feckless heart made of steal and ironI indulge in pride and I?m overwhelmed with shameI encrust my emotions and I?m swallowed by painOh please my king mend this soulYou lift me up and make me wholeDispel my past which is faded and blackSo that I may move forward and never look backPick me apart then reform meInto a brand new being so that I may serve theeWith all my heart and all my mightOh please God hear this plightThis world is twisted and made of thornsBut instead of making it better they just lay and mournWe have drawn the lines and waged the warNot against flesh or the world but for the soulsThat belong to the God in heaven above allSo that no more blood is spilled for Christ has spilt it all

[electriic ink 1]

This kinda religious, but feedback would be appreciated

What's wrong with having a religion? Good poem

[lordofthesabbath 0]

heh, nothing wrong. thanks for the feedback

[icemarle 0]

It's very good! That was very creative of you. It sounds like it came from a prayer book. It's a good job!

[lordofthesabbath 0]

Thanks:)

[Reduced Logic 0]

"Kinda religious"? I'd say, "very religious".You know what? It's good. I like it.