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a dripping solution to solve ones pain a notion to continue on what lies on the surface succombs you trickling down your spine creating chills of confusion dancing in your mind destroying the grounds of your soul seeping into your body engulfing life freeing all you are my drug my escape

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nice poem :olittle strange you say it is "destroying the grounds of your soul"and still is your escape... but nice :D

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yeah,pretty poem you gave.especially i like the clear title of the poem,which describ the feeling enough.i think the poem should have a last version to make,expect...

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