demongaara 0 Report post Posted April 15, 2005 a dripping solution to solve ones pain a notion to continue on what lies on the surface succombs you trickling down your spine creating chills of confusion dancing in your mind destroying the grounds of your soul seeping into your body engulfing life freeing all you are my drug my escape Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
wassie 0 Report post Posted April 15, 2005 nice poem :olittle strange you say it is "destroying the grounds of your soul"and still is your escape... but nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hulunes 0 Report post Posted April 15, 2005 yeah,pretty poem you gave.especially i like the clear title of the poem,which describ the feeling enough.i think the poem should have a last version to make,expect... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
