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Resistable like a heavy rain u wet me

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:( 你像一场大雨淋湿了我 Like a heavy rain u wet me

我抗拒这你的吻 So hard i resist ur kiss

 

你的呼吸和口水 ur breathe &saliva

 

当我醒来 我突然发现 When i awake up i realize

这一切正是我需要的 This just what i need

 

而我在梦里为什么拒绝你 In the dream why i resisted

 

在白天 阳光之国 In the daytime under the sunshine

我找遍每一个角落 Everywhere i seek for u

 

有时,看见一个孩子 One time i saw a child

觉的你在他的眼睛里 As if u a in his eyes

 

我盯着他的背影 I stared at his fading image

如果他回头看我 So long as u turned back

就是你在看我 It must be u

 

但是失望的 他走远了 Disappointedly he vanished into the thin air

 

一朵小花 猩红的花瓣 A small flower scarlet petal

藏着你的笑吗?ur sweet smile hiding in it

 

我摇摇它 i sway it

花香像一个小丫鬟走出来问我干什么 like a maiden comes out the perfum

 

我赶紧丢下她 i leave it immediately

 

走开了 我还回头 Hastend away turning around

突然看见她的影子里 See a house

有一座小房子 vaguely in her shadow

 

而你会不会住在里面 Whether u a in it or not

 

一点土 就可能是你 A grain of sand may be u

一滴水 就很可能是你 A dorp of water may be u

 

有时你很大 Sometimes u a so huge

布满整个空间 that fill all the space around

 

现在我累了 不能在找你了 Now i m exhausted and can not seek u any more

我躺下的时候 As i lie

你开始像整个白天和黑夜一样 like days and nights u cover me

覆盖我

 

在梦中 我推着你 In the dream u push me

就像是推着我自己醒来 as if u push me to be awaken

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I have learned through all of the classes on poetry I've taken at my university, there are many different styles of language and methods of flexing one's creative licence on a piece, but I am of the "school" that spelling things out can never be a bad thing. :( My favorite line is "A small flower scarlet petal" - emotionally and visually invocative

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Wow... Its good... one thing though, you shouldn't translate that poem into english because some of the original chinese meanings cannot be really translated into english...

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