Mario 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 Here is my first creation.. I didn't have alot of time to really improve it.. If i had the time it would be 5x better and animated..sorry people this will have to do for now.. Comments Suggestions? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Triple X 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 Not bad, thr right side doesn't erm merge or w/e with it the best but its still good. Nice job Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zenchi 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 It's alright. Tr is hard to read because of the black/irregular spot on the left side. Also, the text cuts off on the right side. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
qingtian 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 Looks pretty good, although the text is a little hard to read, it doesn't really blend in with the design of the banner... also I think a different font would look better for the text. Other then that, good job Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bash 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 i can't really explain it in any other way apart from this: it's got a lot of potential.right now there's quite a few of little mistakes about it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mario 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 Thanks for everybody's comments. Today i got early from practice and decided to make a new banner... If i won't wasn't out early i banner would look like crap... but here it is.. what you guys think? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bash 0 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 A LOT better Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iGuest 3 Report post Posted September 9, 2004 Very, very nice. I like the background you used a lot. It's simple and still get's the message across to webusers... :: applause :: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zip_mc 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 needs a 1px border then it will be sweet! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zenchi 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 Oh, that's nice! The only thing besides a 1px border that it could use (Might be going overboard) is if you put a pattern in that semi-transparent layer that has "Free Professional Hosting". But that's just a personal opinion. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
qingtian 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 I think that design looks MUCH better! Really cool, great improvement Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mario 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 I've added a border..and i animated a bit.. I hope it doesn't take a long time to load Zenchi:I don't know it kind look weird for me with another design in the transparent layer.. but I will try to see what happens. EDIT: ahh the border didn't show up.. needs some work Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
popac 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 You did a great job, I like this baner, it's the best from all I have seen hear Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bash 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 wow, it just keeps improving definetely the best banner i've seen contributed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mario 0 Report post Posted September 10, 2004 Thanks for all your comments.. I decided to add a little touch to the first one i've made.. The motion of the writing its abit mostly because of somemuch writing.For some reason i can't see the animation. Can anybody else see the animation? The other one i still ahve to put borders Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
