lordofthesabbath

i got the "guitar beat" for it but i just wanted people to look at the content of the song, not the rythm and such.

"I am A Worm"Verse:Raging war against the law of my mindMaking me a prisoner of the law of sinMy tears have fed me day and nightMy heart turns to wax, it melts withinWaging war again, and againPre-Chorus:What a wretched man am IWhat a wretched manChorus:Who will rescue me from thisBody of deathThanks be to GodThrough the SonI am a worm and not a manAll my bones are out of jointVerse:When i want to do goodEvil is there with meWhen i want to do goodEvil's there tempting meMy tears have fed me day and nightPre-Chorus:What a wretched man am IWhat a wretched manChorus:Who will rescue me from thisBody of deathThanks be to GodThrough the SonI am a worm and not a manAll my bones are out of jointMy GodWhy have you forsaken me?My GodWhy are you so far from saving me?So far from the words of my groaning (X2)Chorus (X2)Who will rescue me from thisBody of deathThanks be to GodThrough the SonI am a worm and not a manAll my bones are out of jointI AM A WORM! (X4)____________________________Ok i know this isnt an mp3 of someone singing it but please give feedback anyway.This song was composed by me, Esteban Ramirez, and has not yet been publishedThanks you.

Well, the best brand is Pearl, but you should start with TAMA. Hope i helped, good luck with ur band!

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Didnt take me long to make, glad you liked it! What do you mean? Just got prints? Notice from KuBi: Post merged.

It looked creepy to me at first but then it grew into a sad picture

I wish i could sing:( but not every rock song must be long, some of As I Lay Dying's lyrics are about 12 lines, with an average of about 4 words per line, yet they made it last a good amount of time (about 3 1/2 minutes) so yah, it would be cool to post links to mp3's. I wish i had a singer

VERY beautiful man, you outdid yourself here. The colors fit perfect with each other and the bubbles with the shape are also beautiful, keep up the goodwork!

Good song man:), are you the singer or what? And whats your band's name? i wanna hear yall in the future maybe

Really terrific poem man, really felt the emotion in it. I havnt been able to come up with anymore stuff:(

oh man, oh man, that was awesome dude. I'm not a fan of rap but this sounded..."tight" as they say? . Keep up the good work, hopefully you'll be a rap artist soon!

I've always wondered that myself. But its not like theres no other forums you can post in, theres plenty. And thats what i like about this forum, the variety.

Dont mean to be rude but PinGolfer, please dont post that in someone elses topic, since its pretty long you shoulda posted that in its own topic. But yah that song was good! i liked it alot!.

I played it for 2 years and i had joined a clan called |GL| Gathering of the Lafstafarians and man this clan is the best ever, you'll make very god friends here and theres a few guys who have weird and funny characters. You should join them if you want to join a clan. They have their own server and i think its in the main list under |GL|Clan Server. Look for it in these colors: |GL|. I loved playing it but my connection was never fast enough at times so i quit. But yah its a good game to play.

Update: This song was originally meant to be a sorta "Place Your Experience Here" kinda thing where people can relate to it. It wasnt really meant to tell MY story but rather failures in general. I added this last part to the song:(x2)Everything I once wantedWas broken into piecesThe many dreams I had were not his planHe had his time for me____________________________________Thanks again for feedback.

Thanks alot man! im taking ev erything into consideration! *prints out page* thanks again!

Sorry for double post but on that last one you should reconsider the color of the name becuase it doesnt fit with the background too well.

on the first one you could ad a slight shadow to the name so it can read easier, the ones with the meet the family are pretty good, the flareon one...The font doesnt fit the background or the poke'mon at all. And the last one looks tight except your name is jaggedy. Thats it, good job overall.

P.S. this will probably be our softest song on our cd as it is played with a slow piano beat mixed with some not-so-heavy power chords for the chorus.

Your a cool person, i was hoping someone like you would come along and help me edit my songs cuz i sreiously ain good at grammar. And its a song and the chorus part "Why did i fail so miserably" actually with the music isnt too long. And im taking your edits into consideration so if yopu could post some more that would help me alot! And this song does have a deeper meaning that is kinda obvious with the "wait for the perfect plan". It's a religous belief that God has a plan for us and will execute it in his own time, yet some christians get tired of waiting and rush things causing them to mess up or "Fail miserably".

Welcome Dark God, you'll like it here. Hey btw i used to play Jedi Outcast too under the name of EstE so look out for me:) btw, whats yourin-game name?

Anyone here know the color code thingies for forums. you know like yyyyy is yellow or whatever, i need to know the codes for Gray, Black, Red, and white so please pm me if you know them

The Perfect PlanI sink my face into my handsAnd weep away my lifeIt seems nothing I do can keep me fromFailingFailingI let the rain hit my faceAnd mingle with my tearsLook inside of me and the empty spaceSo afraidSo afraid(Chorus)Why did I fail so miserably? I took my time I took my timeWhy did I fail so miserably?I took my time I took my timeI took my timeWhy did I lose it all?I followed every word you saidBut patience didn?t seem to work at allI guess I blame myselfFor wanting it too muchI lost sight of you and now I?ve given upI give up(Chorus)Why did I fail so miserably? I took my time I took my timeWhy did I fail so miserably?I took my time I took my timeMaybe this wasn?t meant to beNot everything was meant to beDon?t take matters into your handsWait for the perfect planMaybe this wasn?t meant to beNot everything was meant to beDon?t take matters into your handsWait for the perfect plan(Chorus)Why did I fail so miserably? I took my time I took my timeWhy did I fail so miserably?I took my time I took my timeI took my time(X4)_______________________________PS I am the author of this song and i have not yet published it.Enjoy! Feedback please as this will probably go on our first CD if we make one.

I liked it, and the title goes well with it dude;)

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