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Well, yeah, we pretend to put these words onto music. It is going to be a bit like folk-pop, please tell me what you think about the song.... and BTW, there might be lots of grammatical mistakes, hehe...

 

Pete and Anna

 

This is the story of Pete and Anna; a guy and his gal.

A guy with way too short terms (you know what i mean)

and a gal with great great expectations (ha!)

but what really keeps them together (believe me),

was somthing called L.O.V.E. (ugh!)

 

One night, there was a beautiful full moon,

they both decided to take a ride across the old Murray Drive.

She was sparkling like a star, he... he just put a pully ON

he driving on the moon, she laying on his arm...

but what a bad idea to take a ride without checking the gas level!

(that's exactly what i thought)

 

he realized they were in the middle of nowhere,

so he decided to go back to the closest town to get a bit of that damn gasoline

 

but suddenly his luck had changed in a second:

there was this huge truck full of gals and a rude latino guy

"what's the problem, buddy?" said the latino

"we forgot to check the gas level at home" said Pete

"C?mmon guys, get into the truck and join us, you can comeback and get your car tomorrow"

so it seemed to be the perfect time to party with lots of girls around,

"sure, why not?, c'mmon anna, let's party all together" said Pete

 

So the group went to an oldfashioned house five minutes away

the party started with lots of alcohol and drugs, yeah! lots of them!

Sooner that they thought Anna and Pete got really drunk and high

Pete didn't realize there was something wrong, so he started flirting with the gals there

Anna, got really (and i mean it), really dissapointed. So she did the same with the latino

What Pete couldn't remember is that, sometimes (mostly, by the way) size matters.

 

So after a while, the gals were all skipping Pete's flirts, they started making fun of him

(and his short terms)

so that made him want to leave the building very soon

obviously, he started looking for anna, but there was only one place she could had been:

the latino's bedroom, and... hehehe, it was locked, but still can hear her screaming

ohhh.... poor pete.... never know who do you work for---

 

anna and pete, pete and anna, whatever it means... NOTHING!!!!

 

p.s. I just hope it doesn't sound rude to you guys :D

Thank you :)

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I think it's funny that you made the latino the bad guy, even though you're Mexican. Do I detect a self-hating latino? Nah, I'm just kiddin' ya, pal. Nice song.Is a "pully" the same thing as a "hoodie"?

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