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Emotions My poem

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I feel glad today, and I am not sureif it will last for long enough, anywayI feel the joy of this sunny daybut I am curious why wasn't It the same yesterdayI was inspired by some song of beatles for this poem. Please give me some ratings of my ability to writing poems. Thanks in advance

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This was very neatly written, but given the short length, it's a bit tricky to judge the writing quality. I'd definitely recommend trying to write a few more lines on the subject so that the reader can judge the poem and even enjoy it a little more. In its present state the poem ends abruptly and only the true fans of poetry will be able to appreciate it completely. The regular reader, however, will be left wondering why it ended so suddenly and what message was conveyed through it. So take some time and rewrite the poem, trying to extend it a little more. Keep up the good work!

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