Beautiful1 0 Report post Posted August 10, 2009 Dark and cloudy fills the sky soon there'll be many a cryI will fill the heads of all soon I'll be there watch and fallMany will suffer time will tell how the rest of the story will prevail Nothing good can come of me tomorrow in the obituaryWhy are people so unfair they don't even think or care?Fatherless daughters' husbandless wives will soon suffer in their livesBroken homes shattered and torn unable to withstand the stormHopeless leaders take control while their men play the foolhow can people be so insane don't they understand their the only ones to blameLet's not watch as destruction createes because it's better if it dissipatesUnending sorrow it's hopelessly fate obviously were all too late Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rob86 2 Report post Posted August 11, 2009 Cool poem.. here's one.War! Uh! What is it good for?! Absolutely nothing! War! Uh! What is it good for?! Absolutely nothing! Don't mind me..just breaking out in song again. I don't even really like the song... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Phoenix.Illusion 0 Report post Posted August 11, 2009 Nice! I like that one, Fatherless daughters' husbandless wives will soon suffer in their lives Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SpiderVV 0 Report post Posted August 11, 2009 (edited) Very nice. I like it. I think you should do a speech saying that ASAP Edited August 11, 2009 by SpiderVV (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
