Trystim 0 Report post Posted February 2, 2005 ImpressionsCarelessly drifting into the distant horizon,The sun to my back the borders of land disappearing from sight.I once imagined how it would be to drift,Without a care, a worry, or pain in the world.I now realize that without the experiences that I have had,Life would not have been a life.The impressions that you leave on others,And those that others leave on you would never of come to pass.So,life, as we term it,Would of changed for better or worse we shall never know.I hope my impression left on others,Will have been for the good and,They rejoice when it is time for me,To leave my final impression.I know that I will always remember the impressions left on me,For better or for worse they have made me who I am.INSIGHT:This was written after I had a break up with my significant other before I met the woman I am with now. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted February 9, 2005 Impressions Carelessly drifting into the distant horizon, The sun to my back the borders of land disappearing from sight. I once imagined how it would be to drift, Without a care, a worry, or pain in the world. I now realize that without the experiences that I have had, Life would not have been a life. The impressions that you leave on others, And those that others leave on you would never of come to pass. So,life, as we term it, Would of changed for better or worse we shall never know. I hope my impression left on others, Will have been for the good and, They rejoice when it is time for me, To leave my final impression. I know that I will always remember the impressions left on me, For better or for worse they have made me who I am. INSIGHT: This was written after I had a break up with my significant other before I met the woman I am with now. 46059[/snapback] I like it. I think you need to listen to For Good from the musical Wicked:Like a comet pulled from orbit as it passes a sun Like a stream that meets a boulder halfway through the wood Who can say if I've been changed for the better? Because I knew you, I have been changed for good. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
AbstracT 0 Report post Posted February 20, 2005 I hope my impression left on others,Will have been for the good and,They rejoice when it is time for me,To leave my final impression.^That was a deep stanza. You did something different from the regular end rhyme. I hope to see more from you.-1- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
