Poem And Song Exchange Share writing in ONE forum instead of ALL over and give opinions.

[estelleonline 0]

SHOW ME WHAT YOU MEAN BY LOVE:Let me tell you how I feelwhat is wrong and what is reallet me tell you what to doyou hate me but i love youtell me how to show my feelingswhat to do and how to talktell me how to word my answertalk the way and walk the walkCHORUS:Show me what you mean by lovewhats this feeling from abovelet me show you how i dancespin your mind round in a trancegoodbye is a lonely worddrugs and crying is absurdlove is just a painful gamewithout love id go insanepeople dont understand my logicbut lets not get off topici tried to show myself to youyes its love but its not true.What do you think? Leave feedback and share some of yours!

[Ash-Bash 0]

Nice man, I am not great at Poetry but I feel that is a great one you have made up .