Bluebear 0 Report post Posted January 17, 2008 Hello. So I made this layout image, and I would like to hear what you think about it. I did not spend to much time, but some. Most of the time was used to find images, and apply a vintage effect. I think it came out okey, but that is my opinion. I am not to good with photoshop, and you can say that it looks a bit "piczo-ish". Haha, new word. Anyway, I can say that the "theme" is a bit related to poverty, and such things. I am not quite happy about the blending some places. It is quite different from old ones I have made, that where full off celebs and such things. (Yup, even more "piczo-ish.")I had some brushes on it, but I did something wrong when I was adding the color bubbles, so they kind of disappeared. Click the link belowClick here. =) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Mich 0 Report post Posted January 18, 2008 Personally I like it a lot. It is very tastefully done. I do have 2 concerns tho. The quote about fairness mid-left is a little difficult to read. Perhaps you could sharpen up the text somewhat. You might space the leading just a bit further apart. The lines seem a little too cramped together. The other concern is the spacing at the top. The step down menu is really unique, but leaves a lot of empty space as you move from left to right. Do you have any plans to do something to fill in this area? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonesay 7 Report post Posted January 18, 2008 Also I think if you added some kind of border 1px or so not too dark around the image it will look abit nicer. or even add a drop shadow around it so it dosent look as though it blends in as much with the background.Good job Share this post Link to post Share on other sites