ridwans 0 Report post Posted October 20, 2006 when you come to my lifegive me a new soul give me a ne lifeand now you has goneleave mebut im not cryi cant forget you my angel Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deathzero 0 Report post Posted October 20, 2006 Hello leave me to congratulate yourself it is a short but very complete and nice poem indeed I like sige this way and to be a poet jejeje The life is the alone one ENJOY IT!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
husker 0 Report post Posted October 20, 2006 The poem is short and so if life. A couple errors in it you might want to touch up. I don't really get the whole gist of the poem, is it about reincarnation? Not bad though, it's a start. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
