husker 0 Report post Posted September 11, 2006 Well, this poem is very weird and I hope I don't scare you or offend anyone. This is a poor poem that I wrote when I was in a silly mood, so I know it's pretty bad. If Toilets Could Talk Hi my name is John Please do not use me at dawn Sit on me if you dare but I wouldn't like to see your hair I can start to see brown Hey, it's shaped like a crown Wow, this is a big one It might weigh a ton Ahhh, I'm hit That was a long sit Now it's time for the wipe to hit No, he's not doing it! The weight has crushed me It's about time he flushed me I can only think of what I did wrong Let's just hope the next one's not so long. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sylenzednuke 0 Report post Posted September 11, 2006 (edited) Well if it was written in a silly mood. Bet me it's just sooo funny, maybe not to others but this poem made me laugh.It would be more fun if you used the same rhyming scheme in the entire poem and not two of them.Anyways, I just hope maybe someday I will be able to write something atleast...And yeah here in India we normally don't have the kind of toilets you guys have in your country so basically if we *whatever that action is called*, whether it is long or not, it doesnt affect the poor toilet. Edited September 11, 2006 by sylenzednuke (see edit history) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pixieloo 0 Report post Posted September 12, 2006 hahaha.. it does sound like you were in a silly mood. but sometimes that's the best time for all your creativity to come out xDanyways, i enjoyed the poem. it was funny, even if it was a bit gross xP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
the_aggie10 0 Report post Posted October 1, 2006 Well, this poem is very weird and I hope I don't scare you or offend anyone. This is a poor poem that I wrote when I was in a silly mood, so I know it's pretty bad. If Toilets Could Talk Hi my name is John Please do not use me at dawn Sit on me if you dare but I wouldn't like to see your hair I can start to see brown Hey, it's shaped like a crown Wow, this is a big one It might weigh a ton Ahhh, I'm hit That was a long sit Now it's time for the wipe to hit No, he's not doing it! The weight has crushed me It's about time he flushed me I can only think of what I did wrong Let's just hope the next one's not so long. hahahahahhaha nice use of rhyming and poop...made me laugh a lot!! 10/10 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
