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I wrote this one a few years ago.You are hurting deep inside.I can see it in your eyes.It is something truely tragic.Don't just ask me to work magic.I can help you if you'll let me.I just want to see you happy.This has happened once before.She just turned and closed the door.I then saw her two days later.In a casket she would stay there.She left me here alone in darkness.Leaving love's sweet smooth carress.A love that is lost is not forgotten.But always leaves a good heart rotten.So please feel free to speak your mind.Leave all your fears and woes behind.

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is it a poem or a song kind of thing. It looks good. It's a song type sort of poem. Try breaking it down.. or not.. Anyways well done.

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