stevenufc291088 0 Report post Posted November 30, 2005 This is another rap song i wrote, i've only done bout 5 or 6 that are finished. I warn you this one does have some strong views in it, and i would appreciate it if you disagree with them please don't reply about how 'wrong' this song is, but i would be greatful if you let me know what u think and leave some feedback. Thanx!! No More : (1st Verse) I say, f**k war its just people diein? We don?t want no more of them Tactical slugs flyin? I let my voice be heard for them mother?s sittin? cryin? ?Cos their sons been killed in battle and you just turn a blind eye and You don?t give a f**k just ?cos you aint been affected Its time to start a riot get this s**t corrected Why?d y?all let Bush get re-elected He aint done s**t for this world but he wrecked it Bombed and neglect it He aint done nothing to earn your respect yet Why y?all support him I just don?t get s**t Anyways, enough about Bush let?s shhh for a moment of silence?. That was, out of respect for the soldiers on deck Why can?t we stop the violence?? You don?t need a brain Just send the troops home You?ve captured Hussein Now leave Iraq alone Then I hear some politician say ?But we need the oil? Then with no delay, I'd say Why not pay Or exchange for some soil Anyway, It?s gotta be better than killing people for it Ah s**t, what?s the point to this They only gonna ignore it (Chorus) To the one?s who fight Risk their life For their country Patriotism can be so ugly And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more To the people killed Trust there?s a will Where there?s a way ?Cos in our memories y?all still live today And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more (2nd Verse) Yeah, and it aint just wars between countries we catalysts for There?s plenty more, types of conflict your be familiar with I?m sure And since I?m rappin', I might as well mention the rappers beef that?s goin on Don?t take this lightly rappers have died ?cos of lyrics in their songs Take Pac and Biggie for example, their best of friends one minute Next minute, they?re writing songs dissin each other in it Then six shots later, and the legend to be 'Pac is dead Looks like Biggie got his homies to put them shots in his head But then again, Biggie was also found lying dead And we read someone shot him in the head So instead, of becoming living legends they both deceased, from rappers beef Pac and Biggie rest in peace And I hope you?re the example for other rappers to turn the leaf And I'm glad that Jay-Z and Nas beef didn?t last And that 50 and Ja didn?t go as far as Poppin shots of at each other Take advice from a brother I aint trying to sound like a fairy godmother But god forgive, leave it where it is Before you kill one another (Chorus) To the one?s who fight Risk their life For their country Patriotism can be so ugly And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more To the people killed Trust there?s a will Where there?s a way ?Cos in our memories y?all still live today And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more (3rd Verse) Tell me what?s the point in fighting for what you believe in When what you believe in don?t care whether or not you?re breathing The only time it?s right is when, what you believe in is yourself There comes an end to everyone?s life But the path aint chosen by no one else I can see the light, at the end, but the tunnel?s so long It?ll take time to heal the world To create right from wrong And the way were going, World War Three?s just around the corner And if Mother Earth dies, how the hell we gonna mourn her? And you know, I feel responsible being part of the human race ?Cos we?re the cause of the problems as people we have to face But without wrongs, rights just wouldn?t feel good Just like without rain, sunny days wouldn?t feel like they should All the same, there?s a line, we never should have crossed And it?s cost us the lives of thousands that we?ve lost Over the top is where we?ve gone But let?s not let it carry on... ...Let?s make it stop (Chorus) To the one?s who fight Risk their life For their country Patriotism can be so ugly And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more To the people killed Trust there?s a will Where there?s a way ?Cos in our memories y?all still live today And we don?t want no more No we don?t want no war no more Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
savge17 0 Report post Posted December 2, 2005 nice dude, but I dont like rap that much. LOL that would probably work for heavy metal also:P. But nice dude seems like took you a while to write that! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
stevenufc291088 0 Report post Posted June 16, 2006 lol thnx, yeah takes ages getting a song right!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
system 0 Report post Posted July 5, 2006 Damn dudde those are some **** awesome lyrics man. like that guy said, im not that much into rap and those would be good for heavy metal . HAHA i would never be able to make a song like that. Keep it upp!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zerogravity 0 Report post Posted August 13, 2006 s**t that was way coooool. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BordaForx 0 Report post Posted August 13, 2006 It's pretty good I guess. It gets kind of vulgar though. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gameratheart 0 Report post Posted August 14, 2006 I love it. I'm a big fan of rap (well, the more sung types of it) and I think this song really sums up the worlds problems in the way they should be said. Brilliant song......And yeah, I suppose those lyrics could be used for Heavy Metal as well... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rickyRconti 0 Report post Posted February 7, 2008 I love it. I'm a big fan of rap (well, the more sung types of it) and I think this song really sums up the worlds problems in the way they should be said. Brilliant song......And yeah, I suppose those lyrics could be used for Heavy Metal as well...i love it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
