Merry Go Round My girlfriend is a trip...

[tyrant_dictator 0]

Here we go again,On this merry-go-round,But when did it stop being merry?No laughter to hear, not one sound.Soon I will be gone and away,Not to be beckoned near,Nothing will bring me close,This is my greatest fear.A hundred thousand miles will separate,A hundred thousand tears will fall,A hundred thousand doubts will rise,A hundred thousand dreams will stall.Soon I will be a memory in her mind,A face hard to remember,A caress hard to feel,A fire burnt down to an ember.I will burn, cry, hate and fear,I will laugh, love, joke and smile,All in the span of a single phone call,Onto the floor my fears will pile.But here I will sit,With the knowledge I keep,Always wondering,How am I in so deep?

[qingtian 0]

Hey, great poem... some of the rhyming scheme didn't flow that smoothly though, like the syllables were too many on some lines. Other then that it was good, keep writing