Circus Dont know really, its a bit about life

[tyrant_dictator 0]

The Circus lights have been put out.The tents all packed away.Along with your hope and happiness.Preserved for another day.An empty field of forgotten dreams.And soiled stagnant love.Stained with circumstantial evidence.Drowned with cheaply made drugs.One last light left in the dark.Flickering and dying down.The tragedy of purity's death.Screaming without a sound.The fuel is dying as wagons roll.And the well is drying fast.Reality siphons out everything. To see who's standing last. As all illusions are stripped away.And your delirium's torn apart.Will you stand complete and whole?Or slowly fall apart?So swallow your pills to save yourselves.And pray you make it through.But as you're sinking further down.I'll start overwhelming you.Sometimes I wish that I could fall.And be lost, dead in the tide.But every time I start to sink.I remember reasons not to hide.

[qingtian 0]

That was really good! You're a good poet, your poem had good structure and was discriptive, I liked your use of words too

[melkonianarg 0]

Very though provoking, and desciptive. Use of words great, as you found exactly the right ones to use. Good range of vocab...sorry, starting to sound like a teacher...Aswum! What can I say! Write another!!!

[CuM2cmU 0]

cool cool. keep writing. i'm in the mood for more poetry.

[thyob 0]

That was really good you should try to write a story or just more poems cause i would defently read them