Some Poems from 6th grade, dont laugh...

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I wrote these in 6th grade, now, I had the mind of a 6th grader, and I'm not too happy with them, they're supposed to be Patriotic, it was an assignment after 9/11...Haiku:Dieing in service.Saving other people?s lives.Hoping for countries.Haiku:Having a service.For all who have died in war.Felling hope for them.Haiku:Sprinting for shelter.Others dieing for your own.Hoping for others.Haiku:Jumping for your life.Hoping for your will to live.Wishing for others.Haiku:Peace is within us.Peace for everyone around.Peace for all who lives.I think its "Acrostic" but I wrote it as "Acoustic" so I don't know...:W A RI R ES M MH Y E M B R E N C E

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oh,what the funny is dat poeem

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no idea?