Zaccid 0 Report post Posted July 26, 2005 I needed someone to be thereBut no one was thereI needed someoneBut I had no oneI called for someoneBut no one comeI was aloneAnd still no one comeI cried to the skiesAnd still no one comeSo I sat and I cried to myselfAnd I felt a handI looked up hopefullyAnd you were thereI had someoneI was no longer alone Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
biscuitrat 0 Report post Posted July 26, 2005 I'd recommend changing the "but no one come" to "but no one came" to make it grammatically correct. Otherwise, it's touching and nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaccid 0 Report post Posted July 26, 2005 Thanx for the advice on that ... I will do. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
missalex 0 Report post Posted August 6, 2010 Good poem, though I think everyone is alone in the world at times, just have to be patient and someone will come along when you least expect it. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites