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Zaccid

Needed Someone Poem By Me

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I needed someone to be thereBut no one was thereI needed someoneBut I had no oneI called for someoneBut no one comeI was aloneAnd still no one comeI cried to the skiesAnd still no one comeSo I sat and I cried to myselfAnd I felt a handI looked up hopefullyAnd you were thereI had someoneI was no longer alone

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I'd recommend changing the "but no one come" to "but no one came" to make it grammatically correct. Otherwise, it's touching and nice :)

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