Hansel And Gretel rewritten as a poem

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Hi. Here's something I wrote a month ago. The poem is Hansel And Gretel rewritten.

 

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Once upon a time in the local woods,

Two little children set off with some goods,

Rejected by their parents, went off alone,

From Barclays, they took out a massive loan.

With that, they bought a stylish car,

Used it to set off far, very far.

Many years later they found a big house,

Which was guarded by the world?s biggest mouse.

They fought, they fought, they fought all day,

Then a witch came out, she did say.

?Come in, come in, eat some food please!?

Fed them food, reached up to their knees.

Said, ?We?ll go now. We?ve had had it all.?

?Come in, come in, eat some food please!?

Fed them food, reached up to their knees.

They ate, they ate. Their plates were finished.

Little did they know, their lives had diminished.

And that now, it was their turn,

To sizzle, to fry, to be burn'.

It opened, the little burning over door.

It opened, it opened, it opened some more.

The witch, to the oven, she did enter.

And the piece of evil, burnt to a cinder.

The two little children, little did they moan.

Drove all the way, back to their home.

 

I didn't copy it correctly!

 

Notice from snlildude87:

Fixed your error.