A Song I Wrote when I was younger

[electriic ink 1]

It's called These Walls Are Going Decrepit and I obviously wrote it when I was angry about something. I found it on one of my old websites somewhere, so the English is a bit weird. Somehow I can picture the videos being like a Gorillaz one. Here it is:

 

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OPEN & VERSE

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As I go upstairs into me brand new room

I see the paint's blasted on with a boom

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Tiny cracks and disordely streaks

Of which're those not a man could en-weave

 

 

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CHORUS X2

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THESE WALLS ARE GOING DECREPIT

THESE WALLS HAVE HAD THEIR EPISODE

 

 

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VERSE

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Unformed substances, all 'round us, and

Crazy depictions of-a one - man stand

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Graffiti encarved somewhere absurd

Even in crazes you've never heard

 

 

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AFOREMENTIONED CHORUS X2

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VERSE

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Strange goings on these walls are haunting

OK now it's gettin' a bit daunting

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That's right I'm gonna be exiting

The doors close, the fear's entering me

 

 

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AFOREMENTIONED CHORUS X2

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VERSE

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The walls are enclosing NIGHTMARE

RATT'LING RATT'LING RATT'LING OUT THERE

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The door opens CRACKS REFILL,

STREAKS, THINGS, PICTURES, VANDALISM VANISH

 

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AFOREMENTIONED CHORUS X4

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ENDING

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These walls were going decrepit

Then I had it redecorated

 

 

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CLOSING BEAT

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What d'ya think?

[lordofthesabbath 0]

Despite the grammar, i liked it, well done

[electriic ink 1]

I was what about 10 back then. The happy days I had

[ladyspanky 0]

nice song. you're a good song writer huh! so.. you're inspired huh?

[AbstracT 0]

I liked it. You ever thought of going professional as a song writer? The grammer was a little awkward but the concept was very nice.