The World's Ditch Song/Poem of deep feeling

[lordofthesabbath 0]

Trapped in a ditchJust insanity and meI?m gnawing at these chainsThat forever restrain meMy teeth are shatteredI?m bleeding uncontrollablyMy ditch keeps getting deeperAs the earth swallows meIt was you, not just meWho dragged me deeperInto this hell and my holeKeeps getting steeperYou stabbed me in the backTime and time againI never hateYou give me reason to resentBleedingWildlyDepletingMy soulCryingFor helpDying AloneTryingTo exitFailingMyselfDrivenInsanityDyingAloneYou contradicted my plansAnd all the hope I hadMy misery is displayedFor bystanders to laughMy face is blankBody with no certain imageI represent all mankindCause we?ll all soon be in thisMy hope dangles on a stringAnd life is torn from my corpseFlashbacks of my lifeBring me remorseAnd now I haveNo chance of survivalBut I keep trying to escapeSo I can at least keep my soulConstantFearUn-endingTormentWishingFor deathNotMy ownFeelingResentChains Restrain Begging ForgivenessDyingAlone________________________________Feedback appreciated

[electriic ink 1]

Great poem. I like the use of some of the lines only having one word, builds up effect!

 

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