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Marching To Dawn A small poem I made

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This is my first poem ever, it's pretty bad, :).

The troops are marching by...

Past the feilds over the hills,

The troops are marching by.

One by one the troops move on,

Over mountains past the lakes,

The troops are marching by

One by one the march till dawn

Past the feilds over the hills,

Past the lakes, over the mountains.

The Troops are marching by...

One by one the troops move on,

The troops are marching to dawn...

The troops are marhing on.....

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wow, it's pretty nice... I like the repetition. I give 10/10 for a first-timer. however, watch out for spelling mistakes

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