brokenfairy

tis great for your first! A tad short though.. and 'she's so fool' makes no sense.. it could be changed to either 'she's a fool' or 'she's so foolish' also.. if your meaning the song to be written in the sense that its referring to something that has already happened you might wanna change 'How do you think that I can guess' to 'How did you think that I could guess' and you could change 'So next time I see again a thing like this,' to 'so next time I again see a thing like this,' to be grammatically correct.. um.. yeh.. thats about it.. but meh.. its my opinion.. people might see differently xox Kim

yay! my mozilla is much faster now... thanks! it used to take AGES... now it super-speedy it makes playing games more fun... hehe... anyways...thanks alot!

OMFG... thx for this tut... now ppl can STOP stealing my codes... it gets a tad annoying after awhile... anyways... thanks

cool tutorial! thx for that (:

omg... thats so awesome! I love it! thanks for posting the tutorial